Bernard F. Asuncion

Gold Star - 616,242 Points (July 30,1967 / Subic, Philippines)

Forlorn Feelings - Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

R-efrain from forlorn feelings
O-n the eleventh of June;
S-adness shares no mirth,
A-iming at the blue moon.
N-ice day is in sight,
N-ight is about over;
A-n early morn has broken to make you feel much better.

M-ake the forlorn feelings turn
I-nto a smiling face;
R-ise of the sun begins
A-bove the horizontal place.
N-ever ever be lonely,
D-elight is what the dawn brings;
A-llow the beacon to shine, to brighten up the forlorn feelings.

Topic(s) of this poem: birthday

Form: Acrostic


Comments about Forlorn Feelings by Bernard F. Asuncion

  • Cheryl TutaanCheryl Tutaan (6/19/2017 2:03:00 PM)

    A-n early morn has broken to make you feel much better.

    M-ake the forlorn feelings turn
    I-nto a smiling face;

    😊😊😊 It really makes me smile! ...Thank you, Bernard... A smiling 10! 😊
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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(6/19/2017 6:14:00 PM)

    Salamat, Ate Che😃😃😃 👍

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  • Lamar Cole (6/10/2017 9:28:00 PM)

    A very nice feel good write. (Report)Reply

    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(6/10/2017 9:39:00 PM)

    Thanks, Lamar.... a big like👍

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 10, 2017



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