Freedom As Flight Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Freedom As Flight

Rating: 4.8


My eyes boundless are unbent to kiss the sky.
Up, held not by fetters, but bird-free to fly.
Jet-flight mends my spirit with loftiness by
Me. Blue within my eye's view, vast and high.

Outstripping gravity's hold across the mile,
Into my heart—strength of the eagle sets a smile.
With arms v-stretched wide as the wings plumed with style,
Freedom's pace escalates like the jet's speed dial.

The sun's beam adorning my aura is sweet.
My mind from prison free, air friendly did meet.
Freedom like a blanket well over me is neat,
The dream of it now matured as fruit complete.

The rushing of light like the creek uplifts me,
To the stage of wind-great ecstasy I see.
Freedom to reach the highest heaven, the key—
That which grace did transform dear, restraint to be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a wonderful flight in this so beautifuully penned poem...it let the mind soar....excellent one

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Christos Rodoulla Tsiailis 26 October 2009

beautiful, so full of up-lifting words

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Kylie Lowe 03 November 2009

I know that its been said already but you are great with imagery

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 29 October 2009

A poem, which is in rhetorical, beautiful images and with bombastic!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 28 October 2009

A poem of high altitude overseeing some beautiful images.

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Lillian Thomas 27 October 2009

very nice imagery. Do you use a spell checker before you post?

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Wow! Wonderful Obinna and I can feel the freedom with all the excellent imagery you have contributed to this soaring poem. It is all rhymed beautifully too! 10 Karin

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