A Luminous Butterfly Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

A Luminous Butterfly

Rating: 4.6


I.
Wonder winged luminous in my eyes.
Elegance sheer I perceive and prize
On a flower who plays the sun of skies.
What psyche fair in colours does rise
In flight of swerve and curve amid ease?
It my eyes trail wherever to please
Me to relish harmony it frees
Through me as my heart awes in its choice.
My heart sings of its hush to rejoice
On its coaxing wings of love as its voice
Drenched in rhythm to flutter with grace,
Sends its charm my ardour does embrace.
Seeming emitted from its wings' base,
Are bubbles leaping for bliss my eyes face.

II.
Bliss viewed from its pride glowing in flight.
What muse fuelled it to fill the air with light?
Air groomed as spanking breeze to incite
Scenery refreshed with humour bright
Like the ocean of tune in my thought,
Alp's summit in my spirit it wrought,
Joy in its ripened bloom I have sought.
Gladness indispensable is found,
As the place whole revolving around
Me glistens with colours bright abound.
How the colours blaze as bright as gold,
My survey of such is turning bold.
Of my being it inclines to mold,
Description is arduous to be told.

III.
Influences me its aplomb calm,
To rise from seat to be nigh its charm.
Magnetised I extend my right arm
To induce it to float in my palm.
Tenderness on my palm it does stream,
Of experience this touch is a dream.
Filled is my soul with the summer's gleam,
Delectation my soul such will own.
Splendid grandeur in its beam is shown.
Spring of roses in my heart is grown.
Lavishing me with boon stark like the sun
In its giving of joy firm to run.
What enthusiasm star-like in one,
Who has fetched at its very best, fun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Josephine Dixon-banks 01 July 2009

inner beauty personified in words nature's breath in words words are pictures of invisible wholeness of all pulchritude

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Shawnee Gonzalez 01 July 2009

great use of words and ryhme. i love this poem. ♥ §hawnee♥

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Silent Bliss 03 July 2009

thank you for inviting me to read your poem, i trully enjoyed, beautiful words melted with intens emotions, keep up the good work....

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Ershad Mazumder 04 July 2009

Its a great moment to read your mind and soul. I like this kind of poem. Very inspiring. Thanks a lot for sharing.

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Uriah Hamilton 05 July 2009

The beauty of God in a butterfly.

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a wonderful poem with so beautiful images, thanks for informing me friend about the fake hanaring which is bellow this comment...enjoyed reading these sweet verses.. Influences me its aplomb calm, To rise from seat to be nigh its charm. Magnetised I extend my right arm To induce it to float in my palm. Tenderness on my palm it does stream, Of experience this touch is a dream.

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TaNaRa Hanaring 03 November 2009

This is the stupidest poem I've ever read.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009

The form works with the message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 September 2009

What psyche fair in colours does rise In flight of swerve and curve amid ease? It my eyes trail wherever to please Me to relish harmony it frees Through me as my heart awes in its choice. My heart sings of its hush to rejoice...........yes always it is matter for rejoice.. butterflies in different colour and they please us whereever they go..beautiful write..i liked it....10 read mine butterflies around... anywhere.. come home

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 August 2009

this is a fine and organized poem!

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