Freedom Flight Poem by Patricia Gale

Freedom Flight

Rating: 5.0


Oh for the longing that controls my soul if it could but grow wings and fly
Free me, I say

From the song of love that beckons my heart
The call that harkens unto the moon’s tears or of the dying light of a fading star
Free me, I say

If only for the day and bring back on the morrow
Least I should know but one day of freedom
To breath a breathe without a pull upon my heart

Free me, I say

Loose me from the chains that sink endlessly in a sea of dreams
Allow me to fade like the dew upon the heather
Turn me to stone so I may feel no more…..
Free me…. I say

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James B. Earley 01 August 2008

A plight we've all experienced at one time or another! But what is freedom....and from what? Would we recognize it....if perhaps we found it? A poignant composition my friend.

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Ah, P....one to have the reader sighing out loud. It is wonderful to see your erudite pen touching these pages, and your readers' hearts, again. t x

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Thad Wilk 19 July 2008

An capturing and eloquent poem Patricia! ! A pleasure indeed to read! ! *10*! ! Best regards! Friend Thad

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