Kumarmani Mahakul
Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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Freedom Rain Where

Where has my freedom gone?
You have caged me in cage
And you have offered butter,
Bread, cherry, tomato and many,
How can I eat and survive?
Do not you see my dry face,
I am breaking in sorrow and agony,
Please, release me soon!

Although I am a rat of forest,

God has granted me rights to live,
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Freedom Rain Where
Monday, March 29, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,nature,animal,life
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Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,19 August 2018, All rights reserved.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 15 April 2021

The most heinous crime is to imprison without any reason. Your poem invites attention towards one of the most commonly prevalent problem in today's world.

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Kevin Patrick 07 May 2021

A treasure of a poem, Im glad that I had read this, its depth and poignant message, that freedom is universal.

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A poem with a great message and warning. You cannot cage any being. Each life has its own dignity and right to live. Even if it is a rat. Top stars for this thought provoking poem.

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Indira Renganathan 17 May 2021

Much amusing with a message.....interesting to read....5*****

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Kevin Patrick 07 May 2021

I am a small rat, a soul who wanders.

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Indira Renganathan 19 June 2021

Cry of a trapped rat...it has a meaning the other way relatively with human life too...a beautiful poem .....kudos

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bri edwards 13 June 2021

I'm not sure if this is an 'Animal Rights' plea or if you are comparing a 'caged' human with a rat. hmmmm? Good luck i wish to either. bri ;)

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bri edwards 13 June 2021

Kumarmani, my friend, line #12: 'here' not 'hear'. ha ha. ;)

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 June 2021

The smallest of animal in this earth has the right to live freely. To enjoy the sunshine and changing of seasons. Freedom is a right that one gets from one's birth. We are doing a sin by keeping the creatures in cages. Nice poem.

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2021

Every creature has rights to live, ----The pain of a caged animal has bees so marvelously painted.Nothing is as precious as one's freedom.Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

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