Freedom Rain Where Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Freedom Rain Where
Where has my freedom gone?
You have caged me in cage
And you have offered butter,
Bread, cherry, tomato and many,
How can I eat and survive?
Do not you see my dry face,
I am breaking in sorrow and agony,
Please, release me soon!
Although I am a rat of forest,
God has granted me rights to live,
I dwell in his garden with full love,
I move hear and there in search of food,
This planet is not made for you only,
Every creature has rights to live,
Please you do not be selfish,
You try to understand my pain!
Although I am not superior like you,
I am a small rat, a soul who wanders,
Full freedom of mine is my rights,
I too offer prayer to God,
Now I am helpless but not defeated,
If God will grant me the power,
I can cut your iron cage into pieces
You take away your costly butter and bread
And please give back my freedom,
Where is the freedom rain?
You should understand my pain!
Will you like to eat butter inside cage?
Oh cloud in heaven, you make rain,
Take away my pain, freedom rain you make,
Let this cage be rusted and broken,
You redeem me from this danger!
© Kumarmani Mahakul,29 March 2021, All rights reserved.
A poem with a great message and warning. You cannot cage any being. Each life has its own dignity and right to live. Even if it is a rat. Top stars for this thought provoking poem.
Dear @Geeta Radhakrishna Menon, I love this comment of yours. You have echoed my thoughts, as so nicely put here. Thanks for explaining the poem so beautifully.
This morn this poem full of great love and care is on rank number 40 of Best Member Poems. My greatest Congratulations and Respect, Sir God's Blessings in Abundance from Sylvia Frances Chan, Nederland
The most terrible things of all creation is CAGE...to keep birds imprisoned, animals restricted. I am sure good sense will prevail some day.
What a beautiful poem dear Kumarmani G! Loved more than my dear Sylvia loves it
No one ought to be caged, even a rat! Congrats with reaching number 44 on the Best Member Poems on Top 100 of PH
Dear Respected Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, this morning this poem full of human eyes opening is on rank number 40 of the Best Member Poems
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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The most heinous crime is to imprison without any reason. Your poem invites attention towards one of the most commonly prevalent problem in today's world.
Dear @M Asim Nehal, 'The most heinous crime is to imprison without any reason' - so nicely said, loved it.