M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 163,883 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

French Fries.. - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

My heart bleeds and eyes cry
Why should they kill innocents?
When the game is played by G-5!

They planned for chopping potatoes elsewhere
Now they see their own backyard burning.

If you tease the honeybee, it will bite
Let them do whatever they want to at their site

Don’t provoke the fools nor try to teach them anything
They are self-sufficient for self-destruction

Wait and watch their game, which they try
One day they will cut themselves and will make French fries.

Topic(s) of this poem: political, satire

Form: Free Verse


Comments about French Fries.. by M. Asim Nehal

  • (12/21/2015 7:05:00 AM)


    Marvelous poem, nice piece Man..100. (Report) Reply

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  • Samer Manzoor (12/7/2015 6:33:00 PM)


    Beautiful ironical description (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2015 11:41:00 AM)


    Such a brilliant poem, God bless u Asimji (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2015 12:41:00 PM)


    Immaculate writing man....10 (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (11/15/2015 5:04:00 AM)


    Enjoyed the biting satire in this! One day they will be made french fries! But the question remains..... why innocents are are brutally killed! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/14/2015 6:53:00 PM)


    Don’t provoke the fools nor try to teach them anything
    They are self-sufficient for self-destruction- - - - well depicted.Thanks.
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  • Kelly Kurt (11/14/2015 10:51:00 AM)


    A very well written, satirical piece, Mohammed. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/14/2015 8:15:00 AM)


    Wait and watch their game, which they try
    One day they will cut themselves and will make French fries.
    Through satire you really made a point. We have to wait for that day when they will destruct themselves.
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  • Lyn Paul (11/14/2015 7:40:00 AM)


    Feel the heartache in your words.
    Life should just be LIVING for us all. Sadly it is not.
    Thank you
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  • (11/14/2015 7:39:00 AM)


    very sad but that's the way they will continue until they self destruct but unfortunately they will take many innocent with them thanksAsim (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 14, 2015



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