French Fries.. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

French Fries..

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My heart bleeds and eyes cry
Why should they kill innocents?
When the game is played by G-5!

They planned for chopping potatoes elsewhere
Now they see their own backyard burning.

If you tease the honeybee, it will bite
Let them do whatever they want to at their site

Don’t provoke the fools nor try to teach them anything
They are self-sufficient for self-destruction

Wait and watch their game, which they try
One day they will cut themselves and will make French fries.

Saturday, November 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: political,satire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 14 November 2015

Feel the heartache in your words. Life should just be LIVING for us all. Sadly it is not. Thank you

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Sanjukta Nag 14 November 2015

Wait and watch their game, which they try One day they will cut themselves and will make French fries. Through satire you really made a point. We have to wait for that day when they will destruct themselves.

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Kelly Kurt 14 November 2015

A very well written, satirical piece, Mohammed. Thanks

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Loke Kok Yee 14 November 2015

very sad but that's the way they will continue until they self destruct but unfortunately they will take many innocent with them thanksAsim

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2015

Don’t provoke the fools nor try to teach them anything They are self-sufficient for self-destruction- - - - well depicted.Thanks.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 February 2021

I have come across this eerie poem of your sweet hands, I mean sweet wet pen. Sharpest satirical poem, I truly enjoyed.

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Suzon Albert 24 July 2020

Ha ha can a poem be made on this subject as well and you did it wonderfully.

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Deepak S S 06 March 2019

Interesting poem. Nicely written Asim Ji.

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Darren Jkoeryo 21 December 2015

Marvelous poem, nice piece Man..100.

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Samer Manzoor 07 December 2015

Beautiful ironical description

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