French Fries Or French Kiss? Poem by Sheeya Hacks

French Fries Or French Kiss?

Rating: 4.8

In the realm of tasty pleasures, let's take a little stroll,
To ponder on a question that might challenge heart and soul.

Shall we dance with French fries, those crispy, golden treats,
Or embrace the French kiss, excitement pulsing as it meets?

Now, French fries, oh so savory, they tempt us with their charm,
Each bite, a crispy heaven, our taste buds do disarm.
The first, a salty wonder, crunchy outside, fluffy within,
A delight that leaves us longing, with every single spin.

But let's not overlook the French kiss, so full of grace,
A passionate connection, a tender, intimate embrace.
A kiss that makes our hearts sing, a symphony of desire,
It's a feeling so delightful, igniting sparks like fire.

French fries, oh how easy they are, with no strings attached,
A simple pleasure for the tongue, satisfaction swiftly matched.
But French kisses do beckon, with whispers from deep inside,
A sweet, romantic rendezvous, where love can safely hide.

So, let's ponder if it's better, French fries or French kiss,
And find the joy in both, for life's too short to solely miss.
Whether munching on those fries or stealing kisses, oh so bold,
Both are blessings we should cherish, as our stories shall unfold.

Tuesday, August 1, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: humorous,nonsense
Bri Edwards 03 August 2023

end of line 4: I'd replace 'it meets' with 'tongues meet'. Actually I'd much rather eat ice cream than tongues. 'Where WAS that tongue earlier? ?

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Rajan T Renganathan 01 August 2023

I don't have teeths to enjoy french fries the other one is Okey with me.

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Sando Hussam 14 August 2023

I don't need either, would go for Blood - Kidding.

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Bri Edwards 03 August 2023

AND I applaud you for giving yourself stars; I give myself some at times, but usually not 'right away'. If we don't advertise our 'work' it may NEVER be read! ! : (

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Bri Edwards 03 August 2023

Some word associations in the poem don't thrill me, but your topics are appropriate: ' humorous, nonsense'. 4 stars. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 03 August 2023

I just CAN'T THINK of two tongues groping one another as being a 'romantic rendezvous', though I appreciate the r-r alliteration, and what might follow French Kissing! ! I mean, OF COURSE, ice cream. ;)))

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Bri Edwards 03 August 2023

I can't say I've ever been a fan of ANY kisses, except chocolate (Hershey's) Kisses! I've a poem about a chocolate kiss. Kiss With A Twist. : )

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