Friend Poem by salu salu

Friend

Rating: 5.0


friend

At a few feet distance to my feet
he stands staring into my eyes
for long time he continued staring
determined to win unfailingly
as if it used to be his end always.

I’ve been engaged the whole afternoon
watching the splendid sky
a glorious sunset with rare mixture of colours
weaving around, slowly changing and forming
profiles as in a montage painting
I was there alone
making an holiday merry
time stagnant while watching
the wonderful colourland the mirage.
at a moment I simply turned head down
to the corner where stands he, staring me
What a look! so penetrating
Gray, blue purple and white blended eyes
So attractive like pretty paperweight
I was struck on his powerful gaze
Forced me look back on him
I don’t know how long I entertained
Until the dark veil of night falls?
I was unable to
recognize any object except
the two glazing spots
only struck so much in my heart
In sleep and dream
Day and night it stares me above
Not to frighten but to befriend
my scare vanished at stars above.
a pampering palm invites me
for an eternal embrace
that feeling soothes me
and a breeze hugged at ease.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehmet YILMAZLAR 26 February 2009

i came; i read; i liked

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 21 January 2009

Beautiful poem.... You have a friendly interaction with nature.... Great experience Salu........10/10. Regards Naseer

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Barry A. Lanier 21 January 2009

Salu I enjoyed this flowing and gentle rendition of nature and the manner in which you penned your metaphors and descriptive adjectives...............

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Catrina Heart 18 January 2009

to be friend with nature is a great and wonderful thing to do..for it gives you an everlasting comfort and a soothing calmess in your heart and soul...great Poem... CT

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C. P. Sharma 14 January 2009

A good poem on friendship with Nature and its healing touch. CP

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a meaningful and beautiful write, so well penned

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

a glorious sunset with rare mixture of colours weaving around, slowly changing and forming profiles as in a montage painting Rachel Ann Butler

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rago rago 08 July 2009

a good write nature and friend good composition............

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 25 March 2009

the way of narration captivated me. shan

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Honest Heart 17 March 2009

That’s one cool free-flying poem! Great work!

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