***friendship*** Poem by Ray Lucero

***friendship***

Rating: 2.8


When you sail troubled waters
I’m your oaken ship

Where you stand
I’m firmness neath your feet

When you stroll a summer’s day
I’m your umbrella, rain or shine

When you’re unhappy
I’m your circus clown

When you’re afraid
I’m a warm embrace

When you’re joyous
I’m your playmate

When you take ill
I’m a soothing balm

When Heaven calls you home
I shall be a loving archive of your life

ROTMS

(To best friends everywhere)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

oh my goodness. this would be a great poem to say if your best friend was getting married.. i love it.. its amazing.. in fact..i have a question.

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Scarlett Treat 30 January 2008

How marvelous to have your strong, sturdy ship under my feet...or your umbrella to cover me...rain or shine. I like this one best of all I have read so far. Scarlett

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Lucianne Fasolo 01 February 2008

This was so beautiful, Ray! So very sweet and true. It's going to my favorite poems list!

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Konjit Berhane 04 February 2008

this is a great poem...but how many friends are like that... i loved the expressions though very strong and thoughtful thanx for sharing.. peace.. koni

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 May 2020

When you take ill I’m a soothing balm When Heaven calls you home I shall be a loving archive of your life.....an impressive inscription on friendship with a lofty theme. A beautiful poem is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2019

Friendship is the clouds that rise in heat strokes of life and promise showers. A nice poem.

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Hema Satya 13 June 2018

Your poem on friendship is amazing and very true. Please provide me with more of your biography so that my son can use it for the poet's intro for his recitation competition.... Thank you

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Ray Lucero 13 June 2018

Hema, I am a retired businessman living in Oregon. My passion is writing and the outdoors. Please send a message to my poemhunter mail account of the details of your son's recitation. Warmest Regards, Ray

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Pamela Sinicrope 24 February 2017

A beautiful penning/declaration of friendship. Thanks for sharing.

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Rosie Bourget 14 January 2016

This is all about friendship. That is very thoughtful of you.

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