From The Fallen Leaves Of Time.. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

From The Fallen Leaves Of Time..

Rating: 4.6


I'm curious as to what happened to the lovely fragrance of love,
which was released by the crimson flower of life.

The memory icicles form in the interior dome of my mind
as I gather the shattered glass of the past.

Memory, in the shape of a scarecrow, stands in the center, drawing my attention away from my dreams.

As I walk past the closed doors of a hollow heart,
I smell the scent of love, as I gather the time's fallen leaves.

Monday, May 8, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: life,mystical philosophy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 09 May 2023

Love's fallen leaves remain ever-fragrant. Good work

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M. Asim Nehal 09 May 2023

Thanks much for liking.

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Indira Renganathan 11 May 2023

An excellent love poem with a beautiful title...very picturesque...many**************

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Exquisite poetry filled with fragrance of love. Thank you so much dear Asim ji. Top marks + To my favourite

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M. Asim Nehal 11 May 2023

Thank u so much Geeta Ji for your lovely comment.

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The scent of love is wafting and surrounding us all the time.Even the fallen leaves have a fragrance. We need to be in a state of acceptance of this fragrance.

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Dr Nehal is really a master of poetic craft. Very exciting poetry. Unravelling the enigma of words

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M. Asim Nehal 10 May 2023

Just an attempt to align my chain of thoughts the best possible words, your encouraging comments motivate me to carry on...Thanks again.

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Richard Wlodarski 09 May 2023

Wow! And Wow! ! Asim, this is such an incredibly beautiful piece of writing. Mystical magnificence!

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M. Asim Nehal 10 May 2023

Thank u so much my friend Richard, I admire your poetic skills and those thought provoking series. Thanks again.

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