I'm Walking
through a graveyard
late one night
Not feeling quiet right
I feel like
I'm not really here
I can't feel my heart beating
Then something grabs me
from a grave
I say
Who the hell are you
They say
I am you
They say I am you ............ first frozen blood and you feel himself terribly... 10.... (Thank you so much, Dave.....) Tsira
Very good - think I`ll stay away from graveyards though! !
This paints a haunting picture, and really brings the reader to understand the shock of the subject. It leaves you with a sense of confusion from the subject, but also an immediate sense of enlightenment! ! Very nice read! !
Enjoyed reading From The Grave. I'm going to recite Hired Guns. Putting it to music. Steven Drake
your short poem leaves and long meaning. nice poem. top marks.
Wow. I like how you make short poems powerful & really hit the core.
such abstract thinking, and yet, not.....as we face our mortality we must realize that we are close to the grave, but......what does that really mean? .....blessings
We should all listen to the voices from the grave. We still have the oppurtunity to change, for one day we all return ashes to ashes. Great message in yet another thought provoking poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a moment of illumination... another good poem!