dimitrios galanis

Gold Star - 31,379 Points (19.8.1945 / Patero Epirus Hellada [ Greece])

Frosty Times-Frosty Words - Poem by dimitrios galanis

In back-hand frosty times
words freeze too.
They can not the fervour find
conditions chilly need.
Iced and dubious
station in th555roat, in mouth,
hesitate from dent's fence to escape.
Quavering on lips a shame to them.
Fear they do not recognize conditions,
suspect lest your conceptions
lead them in doubting divisions.
If this feeling is your mind's perception,
wonder whether words are your heart's voice.
But if your feeling is your heartbeat,
take them as your mind's choice.
Wayward, frosty times
upset the balance of scale,
dissolve mind's and heart's symphony.

Patience.Seasonal ice sometime melts.

Topic(s) of this poem: ambiguity, heart, mind, perception

Poet's Notes about The Poem

A rendering into english of a poem of mine composed in greek on March 2014

Comments about Frosty Times-Frosty Words by dimitrios galanis

  • Hazel Durham (1/14/2016 4:42:00 AM)

    A breathtaking write on to be careful in what you say as words do hurt and can wound a person like a constant awful imprint on their mind! (Report) Reply

    Dimitrios Galanis (1/14/2016 7:12:00 AM)

    Take into notice, dear lady, that english is not my native language.My english poems, except of three, are rendering into english of poems written in my native language, the greek.So I'm very pleased and encouraged to hear from you who writes so beautifully english verses that I have succeeded to form my verses as to be liked even by those whose native language is english.So do not hesitate to advise me to change what has to be changed in my poems.I'll be obliged to you if doing so.Thank you so much for your kind word.In notice I like most the true word.

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  • Mihaela Pirjol (1/12/2016 11:55:00 AM)

    A thought-provoking poem...the harmony between heart and mind...

    I really liked the last verse: Patience. Seasonal ice melt sometime.
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    Dimitrios Galanis (1/12/2016 12:12:00 PM)

    The last line had to be emended, excuse me for the oversight.Thank you so much.

  • Brian Mayo (1/12/2016 11:43:00 AM)

    I took this poem as a reminder to think carefully before speaking your mind. Try to consider how your words will be received. Maybe I'll pull an ice-cube out of the freezer and wait for it to melt next time I feel the need to rant. (Report) Reply

    Dimitrios Galanis (1/12/2016 12:16:00 PM)

    Thank you for your clever comment on it.

  • Kelly Kurt (1/12/2016 9:57:00 AM)

    Wonderful thoughts and sentiments (Report) Reply

    Dimitrios Galanis (1/12/2016 10:39:00 AM)

    Yours on flakes and their allegory great.Thank you very very much.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 12, 2016

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 19, 2016

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