Fur Elise Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Fur Elise

Rating: 5.0

She reigned supreme as the little queen
of our humble home for about ten years.

We had never thought
that we might want a cat,
but she showed up one day
in a shoe box on our front porch.

Just a kitten at the time,
she was an adorable little ball
of grey and white fur.

There was a pink ribbon
tied loosely around he neck
with a sign:
'Are you my mommy?
I need a home.'

It was love at first sight.

My daughter was learning to play
the piano at the time, and insisted
on naming the cat 'Fur Elise'.

The two of them became inseparable,
and though the cat would play with
the rest of us and let us pet her,
she always preferred my daughter's company.

Furry 'Elise' was the smartest cat ever.
She could jump up and grab the knob
on the front door with both paws,
twist it while pushing with one leg
against the frame, and let herself out!

She had dozens of other tricks
that I have no room to explain here.

When my daughter left for college,
I learned that cats can cry.

Tuesday, March 24, 2026
Topic(s) of this poem: cat,cats,daughter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In 2022, this poem took Fourth Honorable Mention in the Mildred Vorpahl Bass Memorial, a contest of the National Federation of State Poetry Societies. There were 87 entries in that contest. Then in 2024, in the Utah State Poetry Society Spring Contest, it took First Place in Category 13: For Tiny. There were 27 entries in that category. Since UTSPS does not publish their winning poems, I was able to submit it to another contest. This poem then took First Place in the 2024 Poetry Society of Indiana contest in Category 22: Pets. There were 40 entries in the category. The poem is published on page 102 of their anthology Ink to Paper Volume 9.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Timber Koleden 04 May 2026

A touching poem that deserves more recognition! The story it tells is so relatable--its not hard to feel sad at the end! Indeed, those last two lines are masterful strokes in and of themselves in the whole of the poem!

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M.J. Lemon 28 April 2026

Fantastic! Yes, animals are a part of the family and they share our moods, feelings, vicotires and sorrows. Congratulations on the well deserved recognition for this poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 21 April 2026

Even before I read your notes, I knew that this poem was a winner! Congratulations on your well-deserved achievements, Kim! !

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Belle Wassermeister 25 March 2026

Fantastic poem! I love it! Five stars and to my favorites!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2026

A beautiful and touching poem. Congratulations on this well - earned achievement. What an adorable cat with a lovely name. This poem is a masterpiece! To my favorites.

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Kim Barney

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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