Manonton Dalan

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Future >>> - Poem by Manonton Dalan

oh she come with a jug
of fresh water from well
wetting her dress bare
to see shape of her beauty
silhouette by rising sun
I gasp with total admiration
I want to carry her load

she pour me a cup for thirst
after hours of farm toiling
so early start; sun's sleeping
she could have been resting
so nice seeing her now; then
cooking, washing and cleaning
she go to school after work
to find better work; living

Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle, patience, work


Comments about Future >>> by Manonton Dalan

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/6/2015 12:55:00 AM)


    Great imagery and nice poem on lifestyle. When u fall in love things looks different...Nice one 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 6, 2015



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