A fuzzy blanket
On a breezy cold weather
It makes me feel snug.
Copyright 2018, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
You have expressed your feelings of a chilled winter magnificently in just a few words! Thanks for sharing....10
Rose Marie, if you'd added just ONE more syllable to the last line, 'Makes me feel snug', you'd have had a perfect Haiku! Altogether a comforting poem!
A beautiful depiction of delicate poetic elements—butterflies and petals—reflecting the tranquil world of Rose's poetry, where she seeks inner peace amidst the embrace of nature.
making me feel snug...... fine expressions.. our feelings sometimes put in words touch every one who read it. thanku tony.
A fuzzy blanket on a breezy cold weather................Well penned dear Rose! My pleasure revisiting it!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Makes me feel snug excellent write thanks for sharing the poem with us
Thank you for the wonderful comment, Muzahidul.