'Gallant Cries Day' Poem by saif gallant
'Gallant Cries Day'
LOVE O! love where have you been?
My eyes are wondering to see you within,
LOVE O! LOVE where did you go?
my friends say you are along with my foe,
LOVE! O LOVE how can i repent?
You know me well i'm still a infant,
LOVE! O Love my vulnerbilties are with you?
With fake smile of plight and i m having a rue,
LOVE! O LOVE didnt blood of mine suffice,
That you took it to envy me with such a price,
LOVE! O LOVE! Your fake promises made me suffer,
Waiting for you has been an encumber,
On this beautiful day, O love where mates are under shadow,
Going with my twilight of the career still sits with sorrow,
Clopaine or dopamine cannot define,
Still living with those meomeries of shine,
Let them fell and water this motherly earth,
Where lovers like me are often hurt,
Pain is love and love is pain,
Where mistakes are always refrain,
What's love but a knot that's
not binding.
LOVE O! LOVE here comes the end of all,
I am in this world but I ain't
sure if I am of this world.
Love! o love finally one question for you,
What's heaven but the womb
you can never go back to
Saif, such a well expressed poem... congrats for being chosen.... a huge 10+++++++
How can i repent? ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Except one word mistake, let's say a typo this is a magnificently written poem, Saif! Congratulations on being chosen as Member Poem of the Day! I have enjoyed very much! A ten and much more for the vote.
Perhaps it is the capitalization, perhaps the repetition, but there is an energy of proclamation here that is ironically usually reserved for the opposite end of a love relationship—the beginning. Aside from a few typos and a few awkward rhyming moments, I enjoyed the energy of this piece, and how it wandered through various aspects of the pain of experiencing love. (cont)
(cont) I'm glad you broke off the repetition when you did; I think the timing of that was well done. (Some pieces forceably carry a repetitive phrase far beyond its effectiveness and into the realm of irritation) . Nice writing, good poet, and congratulations on POD.
Saif, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A lovely poem! Many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as POD!