Early morning.
When the birds sing,
I hear you.
When the flowers bloom,
I see you.
When the suns rays embrace,
I feel you.
Fragrance the wind brings,
I smell you.
And the bees whisper,
As you do.
“I love you too”
My garden of five senses
It’s..…………..
You
You
You
You
And
Only you.
Spare, elegant and very effective. Wonderful work, Jibin. Warm regards, Sandra
This was a very beautiful piece..cultivating love and care
Haven't forgotten you Jibin, just haven't been around much for a while due to packing to move house. This is a starry-eyed poem. Such a pleasure to read, amorous and tender in its words. Very well presented too. I liked it a a lot. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Wonderful, joseph. I like it alot. A touching love poem, expressing only what the five senses should have been made for.......love.
Psychosomatic Syndrome would be thrilling title for this poem...
Garden of five senses is very unique. So much is said and it's lovely.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a wonderful garden you paint, Jibin. I'm awestruck because you are able to express so much in so few words, and it's still entirely passionate and warm. The way you've summed up love by the person being everywhere is genius. This would have been the Ultimate Romantic's Love Note. Delicious. -L.C.