Garden Of Five Senses Poem by jibin joseph

Garden Of Five Senses

Rating: 5.0


Early morning.
When the birds sing,
I hear you.

When the flowers bloom,
I see you.
When the suns rays embrace,
I feel you.

Fragrance the wind brings,
I smell you.
And the bees whisper,
As you do.

“I love you too”
My garden of five senses
It’s..…………..

You
You
You

You
And
Only you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lipstick Casanova 05 February 2007

What a wonderful garden you paint, Jibin. I'm awestruck because you are able to express so much in so few words, and it's still entirely passionate and warm. The way you've summed up love by the person being everywhere is genius. This would have been the Ultimate Romantic's Love Note. Delicious. -L.C.

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Sam Dragon 04 February 2007

Beautiful, and so sweet, that persons lucky!

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Sandra Fowler 04 February 2007

Spare, elegant and very effective. Wonderful work, Jibin. Warm regards, Sandra

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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 February 2007

Mysic flows well in your poem-short and sweet

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Peter A. Crowther 04 February 2007

A beautiful poem of great charm and delicacy

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Gone with the wind 31 July 2008

This was a very beautiful piece..cultivating love and care

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Ernestine Northover 24 February 2007

Haven't forgotten you Jibin, just haven't been around much for a while due to packing to move house. This is a starry-eyed poem. Such a pleasure to read, amorous and tender in its words. Very well presented too. I liked it a a lot. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Sara Crandall 05 February 2007

Wonderful, joseph. I like it alot. A touching love poem, expressing only what the five senses should have been made for.......love.

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Qais Shah 05 February 2007

Psychosomatic Syndrome would be thrilling title for this poem...

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Mary Das 05 February 2007

Garden of five senses is very unique. So much is said and it's lovely.

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cochin, kerala state, india
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