When I am with you
I am short of words
And then I realise……………
We don’t need words to speek
And when I talk to you
I even forget what I just said…..
lovely poems.... thanks for sharing. You have great ideas. Keep writing!
Hi Jibin! So sweet! How aptly you have captured the psyche of a fumbling, innocent, young mind deeply in love!
hmm...eloquent silence as we say... nice li'l poem... Asma...
A love poem that has the ring of truth. I especially like the last line
love poems should be like this...very powerful and appealing...
At your age if I guess something from this poem, you should not blame me.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
When I am with you I am short of words And then I realise…………… We don’t need words to speek And this is a captivating poem.... best wishes