Early morning.
When the birds sing,
I hear you.
When the flowers bloom,
I see you.
When the suns rays embrace,
I feel you.
Fragrance the wind brings,
I smell you.
And the bees whisper,
As you do.
“I love you too”
My garden of five senses
It’s..…………..
You
You
You
You
And
Only you.
That poem is really beautiful. Your poetry just gets better! Keep writing!
Garden of 5 senses...this one smells good, looks great, tastes divine, feels lovely and most of all rings musically in my ears! Superb!
Ever so romantic, gentle... the imagery calls to the soul of the nature lover. I love this. Esther : ]
This is superb poem written with intensity of passion and maintained throughout the poem. Wise use of few words to great effect.
This was a very beautiful piece..cultivating love and care
Haven't forgotten you Jibin, just haven't been around much for a while due to packing to move house. This is a starry-eyed poem. Such a pleasure to read, amorous and tender in its words. Very well presented too. I liked it a a lot. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Wonderful, joseph. I like it alot. A touching love poem, expressing only what the five senses should have been made for.......love.
Psychosomatic Syndrome would be thrilling title for this poem...
Garden of five senses is very unique. So much is said and it's lovely.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i feel the breeze of love caressing me in a garden full of flowers...really beautiful poem...with very few words you can express so wonderfully well....