! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *genuflection *! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *genuflection *! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.9


heavenly wishes reason to glow
enlighten soul deep within
heart knows well reeks of sorrow
words inspiring leads to light

dream onshore resurrects faster,
as gleams of bliss bestow upon
head touches feet genuflecting
as reed latches on etching smile

yet in between, lie cliff and chasm
for truth as it needs blessing divine
heart sneaks slowly into whispers of hope
sun turns dawn pounding darkness to dulcet

yet it is golden whispers let me awake
to smear dream over the soul to smooch
and i keep golden shadow stifling beneath
let your blessing by hope of tomorrow transcends within

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 08 September 2009

Inspirations and blessings instill dreams in us and hopes transcend.A golden mirage looms, to reach the same we have to surmount the barriers of cliffs and chasm.But mirage will no longer be a mirage once the barriers are overcome.And Subhendu, you will surmount any barriers in the way of your poetics to grip the golden shadow or golden mirage.Fantastic as always.

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Keith Young 07 September 2009

Great poem living another day can always make u feel better

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Luwi Habte 07 September 2009

Dr, this is so nice poem i love the rythm luwi

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Dr Kamran Haider 07 September 2009

Loved the lines... heart sneaks slowly into whispers of hope sun turns dawn pounding darkness to dulcet and to smear dream over the soul to smooch Wow Sir... Great write... Masterful and surely enlightening...

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Surya . 07 September 2009

beautiful poem.good composition and nice meanings conveyed.last para is really fine yet it is golden whispers let me awake to smear dream over the soul to smooch and i keep golden shadow stifling beneath let your blessing by hope of tomorrow transcends within ' voted10 surya

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Lynda Robson 11 September 2009

Tenderly written and your experience madeyou realise how fragile life is, well composed 10 Lynda xx

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 10 September 2009

Awesome flow....greatly enjoyed.....

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Shekhar Joshi 10 September 2009

Excellent.......deep and meaningful..........liked it.........

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Eyan Desir 08 September 2009

Poeetic master piece good write 10ssss

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Dana Amer 08 September 2009

So deep, sometimes we need something to remind us with the mercy of God, nicely written with strong phrases & structure, good job

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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