Get Up And Rise Poem by Chandini Jaswal

Get Up And Rise

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When words fail to explain
And eyes are tear drained
Get up and rise
Don't welcome the loser sighs
As the clock ticks by
I start to cry
Hush! Says the whisper: never let the good thoughts wither
Worrying is not worth a tither

Comfort, slumber, luxury often beckon
"Is that a permanent solution? "I reckon
The whisper shouts now: get up and rise
Defeat is a loser's paradise

Get Up And Rise
Sunday, August 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: motivation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On the eve of my birthday, I decided to write on an important lesson, that I have learnt from all these years. I have observed that, In times of crisis, we often end up losing all hope and not working towards it.
Whilst writing this poem, I felt motivated and happy. Hope that this poem instills the same feelings in you when you read it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 04 August 2019

A wonderful poem, full of hope and life. It certainly brightened my outlook! My day. Whoever says poetry is depressing, can hush up and change their mind after reading this joyous gem!

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Héritier LOSEMBE 01 May 2020

Good piece of art. I like it

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Anjandev Roy 22 November 2019

Wonderful write.anjandev roy.

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Chandini Jaswal 22 November 2019

Thank you so much sir, delighted to know that you liked the poem

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Chinedu Dike 22 November 2019

An inspirational piece written in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Chandini Jaswal 22 November 2019

You are very kind sir, thank you so much for reading my poems and sharing your thoughtful observations on the same.

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Nice writing, nice to read poet

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Chandini Jaswal 16 August 2019

Thank you sir, delighted to know that you liked the poem

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Michael Walker 11 August 2019

I do feel hope when reading this poem. I too have learnt that it is counter-productive to sleep in late in the mornings. That is not a solution. 'Get up and rise' is better.

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Chandini Jaswal 11 August 2019

Thank you for the kind words sir. Your comments have encouraged me to write more!

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