I Am A Beach Poem by Chandini Jaswal

I Am A Beach

Rating: 5.0


The strong beam of light,
Making my crust bright,
My beautiful tides,
Giving the surfers sea rides,
The magnificent sand castles
Gorgeous young people keeping me bustled,
The lofty coconut trees,
The cool breeze,
I am a beach,
Love life to the utmost I teach.

God and Nature’s marvel,
Though covered with pebbles,
The pretty shells,
Which ring like bells,
I get thrilled,
When I hear my tides’ shrill,
I give life,
And let the marine thrive,
I am a beach,
Love life to the utmost I teach.

I Am A Beach
Sunday, May 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: personification
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A personified poem, expressing the allure of the sandy, stony beach
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 11 September 2015

Gorgeous young people keeping me bustled, The lofty coconut trees, The cool breeze, I am a beach, personification of a beach. At your young age you write already. wonderful. keep up and become a great writer. thank you. God bless

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Chandini Jaswal 16 September 2015

Thank you so much Dr.Brahmin! Glad you liked my poem!

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Michael Walker 24 November 2019

Successful personification of the beach with all its attractions. I love beaches like the one in your photo. My standout line: 'giving the surfers sea rides'. That's what I used to do.

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Rajnish Manga 10 August 2019

A fascinating landscape of a lovely beach with such precision that the scene instantly comes to life. Full marks for this remarkable poem.

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Chandini Jaswal 10 August 2019

Many thanks for reading all my work sir. You have encouraged me to write more.

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Paul Sebastian 07 December 2016

Lovely write. Keep writing and your words will turn into jewels!

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Chandini Jaswal 28 March 2017

Thank you sir; with such heart warming comments from readers like you, how can anybody stop!

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Hazel Durham 28 October 2016

I love the concept and the stunning imagery of this very beautiful poem. I love the ocean too, it is nature's icon, a legend of moods and tranquility giving inspiration to mankind! You are a very talented poet!

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Chandini Jaswal 28 March 2017

Thank you ma'am; your work is a great source of inspiration for me!

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Unnikrishnan E S 28 June 2016

Hi Chandni, This is the first time I have a read a poem by you. Enjoyed reading, thoroughly. I live in Kerala, with a beach wherever you turn to. And I lived in Chennai (Madras) for long- there are two very long and beautiful beaches there. And of course, I lived in Mumbai for some time and was regular at Juhu.. I love beaches. But, have never tried to explore her heart and mind, the way you have done. I am a beach Love life the utmost I teach Great thinking- yes, that is what a beach teaches you- love your life, love your earth by loving your life. Fantastic idea expressed in exquisitely beautiful imagery drawn in from the nature. And beautifully, poetically and rhymingly worded. Nice work. Continue writing and sharing. Thank you.

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