A giant once didn't care for his soul
Sins he would commit eat humans whole
Sometimes would get a fit
Everyone he would hit
A brave knight tore him a new hole
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Stunning expression. Fun ending and amusing one. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Kumarmani. My brother Sayim is inspiration for this one. And your comments are a constant source of inspiration.
Had to laugh out loud at this one, especially the last line! Very important message within it though! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn
It gives me immense happiness that I was able to make you laugh RoseAnn. Sometimes 'the medium is the message', said a wise man :)
Rightly deserved end to the wicked giant.....! Along with humour, you have brought out a moral too! Evil will be punished! A nice dedication to your valiant and daring brother! Enjoyed Ayman!
Thank You Valsa, your beautiful and unique writing style are unmatched and it shows in your comments too. I wrote this to cheer up my brother Sam as he is far away from home and loved ones.
I would like to know what metaphorical giant your dear brother slayed. Great limerick with a fun ending
Dear Kelly he has slain some metaphorical giants and some actual ones I will tell you in a message :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The giant deserved it, a lovely limerick.
Yes he did. Thank you Akhtar Sahib