Gift..... Poem by Anita Trivedi

Beautiful poem with tender sentiments....//What gift shall I give thee? Coz my angel you are most precious gift to me….// Though thee art the precious gift to mee...I will not be left behind in Giving....That's the spirit of love...value something, give it time and merge in yourself just like a gift. Thanks

Anita, its a nice poem..... but i wud request you to be more thoughtful and u will bring beauty at its best in your poems.... its not that this not good... it could be more beautiful if just relax and think more deeply... god bless u...! !

Beautiful!

what is 'sayer'? Nice rhyming but the language context is a bit off. Good potential...

So much of innocence in your poem dear Anita. What gift shall I give thee? Coz my angel you are most precious gift to me….. Shall I gift you innocent prayers, You will be rich with innocent prayers, And to beauty of life you will be near. You equate beauty with innocence here. very very nice Anita. my heart jumps when i read ur poems. thank you

you are a golden gift of existence. sweet melodious poem.

‘Shall I gift you innocent prayers, ’ ~ To Thee [Angel] it is best offering what a mortal can give… ‘Coz my angel you are most precious gift to me…’ ~ Yeah sure Angel always precious riches to such offerings from you… Excellent poetry lifts vibe high and highest …to feel the ‘Giving’ and ‘Receiving’ [Swapping] inner pure pulsations…thanks for sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

I shall say this was a cute one....brought a smile on my face

A beautiful poem indeed with all the sweetness of honey and innocent prayers! Nice rhyming. Great I give 10+

This Indeed is one of the finest poems i have read in recent times. Great Going...Hope I can write something as good as you write...God bless