hopeless 111

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Go Away Go Away - Poem by hopeless 111

go away go away
i can not force you to stay
but, what i know you will return
you must go away to know
whom you prefer
i know you are too selfish to take such a hard decision
not because you love me
but for yourself

go away go away
you are not a man to care
i was blind to see, selfish and the way you love yourself
you think you are the only one in the world
the only one walk under the sun
weak up weak up
you are nothing to care
i recover from my illness
to see whom i must care
plz go away but never return
as there no more the woman you met before


Comments about Go Away Go Away by hopeless 111

  • (8/30/2009 5:15:00 PM)


    fantastic as usual....but this is so hard if it is a real experience! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (7/31/2009 7:06:00 AM)


    wooooooow i really love it fantastic
    mostly the verse when u say'u think that u are the only one in the world
    the only one how walks under the sun.
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  • (10/15/2008 2:58:00 AM)


    beautiful poem and full of strong words i can use it to whom don't deserve the love.
    i like it, , especially:
    do u think u r the only one
    the only one walk under the sun
    good work
    (Report) Reply

  • (8/13/2008 1:16:00 PM)


    SUCH PEOPLE SHOULD BE REJECTED BY ALL HEARTS OF MEN AND WOMEN...I LOVE THE WAY U NARRATED THIS POEM NICE WORK. (Report) Reply

  • (6/19/2008 11:54:00 AM)


    a bit rough in places but otherwise very good (Report) Reply

  • (5/20/2008 6:02:00 PM)


    fantastic poem..we should always say to everyone like him 'go away'. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 28, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 18, 2011


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