Unfair Poem by hopeless 111

Unfair

Rating: 5.0


the empty world all i see
the dark covers everywhere
frightened souls got no where to settle
fear, terrible, scary scene

no hope no gain no well to see
bloody bodies spread here and there
the rational minds seem shocked
for the murdered crime stooped to see

the silence world leaded to it`s end
but who cares to feel
everybody gathered for the absolute end
without any consciousness

the dull atmosphere calls everyone
singing in the dark scene
the desperated land starts here
for the miserable people come to see

new life where no light
the kept sun cannot release
it`s captured with the unfair minds
that leaded to the disaster scene

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lola Hi 27 July 2009

exellent job your poem is so meaningful.

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Reshma Ramesh 03 December 2008

neat poem.....keep writing

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 December 2008

Theres always a darkside within ourselves.......without us realizing.Good job Angel.

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Joseph Poewhit 02 December 2008

Clouds of illusion covering life

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Fiona Davidson 02 December 2008

Powerful words...very well written...thank you

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