Go On Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

Go On

Rating: 4.9


as a single soul
with just a pair of ears
i could hear his song
i could hear him say
'go on'
'this is my world-
you need'nt fear'
and that is when i decided-to
GO ON

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 28 December 2008

Go on..and move one.that's the best and the right way to do.No turning back. this is nice..short, simple and wonderful.thanks for this wonderful sharing. Hugs from here, Meggie

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Ency Bearis 30 December 2008

lets move on..even things are awry no matter what whatever it is.. way to go.. nice theme..great one..

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Indira Babbellapati 30 December 2008

when the word is from HIM, GO ON...

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Kesav Easwaran 31 December 2008

God on...i mean on your ears...good going here SLN...a good crispy piece...10

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Moushumi moushumi 31 December 2008

Thats the spirit, please go on. And let go of all those which are not music. Happy new year.

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Naidz Ladia 17 March 2009

written in short lines but hundreds of meanings.. naizz

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Vernon Eaker 21 January 2009

Follow your conscience... go on wonderfully written this is a solid 8 very nicely done

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Chitra - 20 January 2009

the Higher voice that resides within...no matter just follow it..go on! ! way to go! !

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Greenwolfe 1962 10 January 2009

Simple and direct, yet complete. Very good structure as well . GW62

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Luis Alvarado 02 January 2009

Nicely put. We all need to hear that song and be encouraged to go on! !

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