Saturday, February 23, 2008

God Bless The Children Comments

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God bless the children who dwell in the desert
And bake in the heat under African skies,
Scorched by the sunlight the land lies infertile
So cracked and now empty their waterhole lies,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Deborah Cromer 03 August 2009

You managed to write in a precious way about something real and very painful. There is sadness and loss, but there is hope. Well written. DC

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Duncan Wyllie 06 March 2008

I hope that one day all this will be a thing of the past and both Children and adults a-like will find heaven Love duncanX

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Ernestine Northover 25 February 2008

So very well described here Andrew, and one just had to keep reading, it was such a compulsive poem. Excellent write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Thad Wilk 23 February 2008

So Sad and So true Andrew! An excellent reminder and a touching poem indeed! ! Best Regards, Friend Thad

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C.R. Clark 23 February 2008

An excellent poem, Andrew. There are many tragedies in this world, but when it's happening to helpless children it is especially upsetting. Thank you Richard

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Ann Beard 23 February 2008

A vivid description of our worlds shame. Well written Andrew.

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