~ Goggle Us Still? ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
June 23,2010
O' language go
For holidaying.
Sunless melanized
Below bare sky
We’re snuggling.
Ambience abstracted
Undress unmantel
Zephyrus tactile conversation
Affective stare swapping
Voxless harkening
Protoplasm syncretizing
A-one entwining
Zesty zygoting!
Involuting melting
Formless fromless
We’re in unison ideation.
.
Why language
Goggle us still?
Know not
We’re Honeymooning?
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Glossary: With humility some glossary given for what I tried to express.
[1] Melanized ~ Make or become black
[2] Vox ~ Voice
[3] Harkening ~ Listen
[4] Syncretizing ~ Become fused
[5] A-one ~ Of the highest quality
[6] Goggle ~ Look stupidly.
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Dear Nivedita, sorry to reply you late. Since I was not on this site, I didn't see your message. Now coming to you poem. It is really great to read such kind of piece her, the place where I find the poets with from all and different strata. And by reading this piece of yours I consider you in the cream of the list. I truly liked your effort. Ayaz Warith
Sorry there are many typing errors...hope you understand...hahahaha Salaam
Sorry there are many typing errors...hope you understand...hahahaha Salaam
I am getting so much impressed by ur poems...Your way of expressing and usage of words is Unique..and i love it
how it is if gopgle b our language.most of our problem would have been solved
I can tell by your rating that you are a great poetess. However I am just an uneducated, boring, wannabe, and I am sorry but I don't get it.
i give it a 10 because of its vast intrigue as well as its insanely confusing style im at a loss for words really
This is like my Oxford dictionary is making love in a syllable abstract way sadly zygote gametes cells are germs, oh english has so many potty words , never the less loved it...regards
You are so Original....use some words that rarely used...and u are a poem designer for me, and it original and has own style...different one...and after read some of your poem i think u are very intellect person...u brave to voice what someone dont...take care!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fantastic honeymooning! No language only tactile conversation, lost in ideas in unison-great offbeat poetry. It is lovely! Thanks.