Golden Ink Poem by Rini Shibu

Golden Ink

Rating: 5.0


The moonlight carried the breeze
away from the fiery kiss of the sun
Waking up the jasmine flowers
and night blooming cereus 
she oiled and lighted the lamp
The night started to glow than ever before
The scented breeze stirred her heart
She wrote the moments with golden ink
And the gust of wind took it away
It flew high above the sky
The moon painted it with silvery glitter
And studded it among the stars in the sky

Wednesday, April 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: ink,moments,poems
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 11 April 2018

Hi Rini, Beautiful poem. I wish it gets studded among the stars in the sky. A starry 100 for this beauty.

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Rini Shibu 12 April 2018

Thanks for your compliments..! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 November 2022

Beautiful....a beautiful poem. Top score.

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Robert Murray Smith 24 April 2018

This poem is fantastic. So beautiful. +++10

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Rebecca Navarre 16 April 2018

Ever So Beautifully, Moving Powerful! ! ! ! ! With Ever Such Beauty This, Shines Glows! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rini Shibu 17 April 2018

Thanks Rebecca Navarre.....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 April 2018

A very imaginative poem with compelling imagery. A magical night on the celestial dome has been painted on the canvas of this fascinating piece.10

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Rini Shibu 14 April 2018

Thanks for visiting this poem Rose Marie..! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 April 2018

A poem on nature with thrilling expression has been posted here startlingly. Highly imaginative too. Thank u Rini.10

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Rini Shibu 14 April 2018

Thanks for your comment Kumar..! ! Rini

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