Golden Star Poem by Rini Shibu

Golden Star

Rating: 5.0


Shimmering sunshine
smiling on my face
When touch my heart nothing
It can replace
Pour on me little love
And covers with it's warmth
Takes away the darkness as
it glows on my path
Early morning streams in
through the window pane
At night hides somewhere
leaving me in pain

Friday, August 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Your Benefactor 24 August 2018

It's a brilliant poem Rini... loved reading it...!

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 August 2018

Very nice poem about feeling of sunshine in the morning and how it gives in to darkness with its sadness and pain. Enjoyed.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 August 2018

Pour on me little love........ this is actually the prayer of every one.......... we all need love. without love how can one survive.......... very nice poem and a prayer....... thank u dear poetess. tony

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 August 2018

At night hides somewhere leaving me in pain But Rini, the fall of night gives us an opportunity to contemplate: When winter is here Can spring be far behind? “The darkest Night is just a harbinger of the brightest dawn...”

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Lamar Cole 24 August 2018

This is a very good poem dealing with emotion.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 August 2018

A lovely poem that vividly portrays the effect of the warm rays of the beautiful sun. A heartwarming write.10

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Kostas Lagos 24 August 2018

The sun warms bodies, hearts and souls. Thanks Rini

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