Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 16,002 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Gone With The Tide - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

A tide had come.
It washed away everything.
Leaving nothing on the shore.
All the happiness and excitement,
It took away along with it.
Nothing left on shore.
Just a song of silence,
Played by wind can be heard.
All the liveliness gone along with the tide.
Just a whisper of calmness can be heard.
Now its like a blank paper waiting to be filled.
But the ink of joy dried away forever.
No new song could fill this blank paper
Let's make a boat of it
And float it on the river.
Let it flow along with the wind
After a time it will just sink deep down into the tide.
Yeah, a song can be heard in future
Of the dead boats end! ! !

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Sumi Nair

Submitted: Saturday, October 05,2013
Edited: Monday, October 07,2013

Comments about Gone With The Tide by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/12/2017 12:40:00 PM)

    nice collocations. Thanks for sharing.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/12/2017 12:39:00 PM)

    nice collocationsw. Thanks for sharing.10 (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (3/28/2017 8:55:00 AM)

    So original I love this brilliant write with your great imagination you have crafted a gem of a poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2014 11:02:00 PM)

    This is very insightful can be related to our wonderfully crafted with nice metaphor.....amazing
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, December 13, 2013

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