Geetha Jayakumar
Kerala Palakkad
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A Breeze Of Loneliness!

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While walking through the fields
Along with you on no moon night
I never knew
I would be traveling all alone
One day on the same path again.
Though I was passing
Through the tunnel of darkness
I didn't fear the shadow of mine
While being with you.
Today full moon night welcomed me
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Monday, February 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
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No day is same. Every day is a new day As bright as sun! Which is sure to come! ! ! a beautiful mask of smiles keeps us from woes and wiles. well done!
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 September 2018
oday full moon night welcomed me With its delightful twilight What made me fear my own shadow I am not sure May be the loneliness of breeze Touched me painfully.......touching expression with a theme of pain. It is really a beautiful poem so nicely executed and shared amazingly.. Again thanks for sharing.10
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A poignant write about life Sometimes in times of loneliness, hope springs. Wonderfully written with a meaningful message.10
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Terry Dawson 19 April 2018
Yes, we all crave the fellowship of human society. A universal need beautifully related, thank you Geetha
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Rini Shibu 23 September 2017
I didn't fear the shadow of mine being with you, Loneliness of breeze touched me painfully Deep pain and loneliness and the fear, well expresed
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Resh Kav 13 August 2017
A great poem with deep meaning. togetherness of positive elements is not possible every time.
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Tom Allport 24 May 2017
a poem of togetherness now gone only memories of a loved one? ..........wonderfully written.
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Neela Nath Das 05 April 2017
Loneliness throws us into fear and uncertainty.Nature here is representing the narrator's own self.Magical effect it has created.Thanks for giving us the scope for reading this poem.
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Ravi A 14 September 2016
The same landmarks we happen to be while in happiness can bring in tears in a different situation. For example, a church. Where somebody got married, it can bring in happiness while seeing it but it can bring in tears on separation. Church doesn't change but our attitude has a different footing now. Good poem.
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Anandh Kumar 01 August 2016
...loneliness of breeze touched me painfully.....so beautiful wordings this touched my heart. Well written.
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