While walking through the fields
Along with you on no moon night
I never knew
I would be traveling all alone
One day on the same path again.
Though I was passing
Through the tunnel of darkness
I didn't fear the shadow of mine
While being with you.
Today full moon night welcomed me
With its delightful twilight
What made me fear my own shadow
I am not sure
May be the loneliness of breeze
Touched me painfully.
©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR
© 2014 Geetha Jayakumar
Even in full moon, symbolic of fullness or surrounded by every thing, man some times feel lonely, that is the breeze of loneliness, the poet wants to speak about.Loneliness hurts.A great poem indeed with deep meaning.
When we have strong hands to hold onto, we don't fear walking through even fire. But when we lose that support, we begin fearing our own shadows! A lovely poem that leaves a tinge of pain even after read!
In loving company darkness matters not. In loneliness even full moon casts a shadow to make it scary. Beautiful poem.
May be the loneliness of breeze Touched me painfully................how beautifully you have portrayed loneliness...like it
Loved the concept of loneliness of breeze. A beautiful poem.
No day is same. Every day is a new day As bright as sun! Which is sure to come! ! ! a beautiful mask of smiles keeps us from woes and wiles. well done!
oday full moon night welcomed me With its delightful twilight What made me fear my own shadow I am not sure May be the loneliness of breeze Touched me painfully.......touching expression with a theme of pain. It is really a beautiful poem so nicely executed and shared amazingly.. Again thanks for sharing.10
A poignant write about life Sometimes in times of loneliness, hope springs. Wonderfully written with a meaningful message.10
Yes, we all crave the fellowship of human society. A universal need beautifully related, thank you Geetha
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So nicely envisioned and aptly presented. An intensive poem I like most. Thanks for sharing.. ...10