A Breeze Of Loneliness! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

A Breeze Of Loneliness!

Rating: 4.9


While walking through the fields
Along with you on no moon night
I never knew
I would be traveling all alone
One day on the same path again.
Though I was passing
Through the tunnel of darkness
I didn't fear the shadow of mine
While being with you.

Today full moon night welcomed me
With its delightful twilight
What made me fear my own shadow
I am not sure
May be the loneliness of breeze
Touched me painfully.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR
© 2014 Geetha Jayakumar

Monday, February 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2015

So nicely envisioned and aptly presented. An intensive poem I like most. Thanks for sharing.. ...10

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Bharati Nayak 21 June 2015

Even in full moon, symbolic of fullness or surrounded by every thing, man some times feel lonely, that is the breeze of loneliness, the poet wants to speak about.Loneliness hurts.A great poem indeed with deep meaning.

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Valsa George 06 February 2015

When we have strong hands to hold onto, we don't fear walking through even fire. But when we lose that support, we begin fearing our own shadows! A lovely poem that leaves a tinge of pain even after read!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 February 2015

In loving company darkness matters not. In loneliness even full moon casts a shadow to make it scary. Beautiful poem.

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Salini Nair 03 February 2015

May be the loneliness of breeze Touched me painfully................how beautifully you have portrayed loneliness...like it

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 March 2022

Loved the concept of loneliness of breeze. A beautiful poem.

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East Sea Fairy East Sea Fairy 29 September 2020

No day is same. Every day is a new day As bright as sun! Which is sure to come! ! ! a beautiful mask of smiles keeps us from woes and wiles. well done!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 September 2018

oday full moon night welcomed me With its delightful twilight What made me fear my own shadow I am not sure May be the loneliness of breeze Touched me painfully.......touching expression with a theme of pain. It is really a beautiful poem so nicely executed and shared amazingly.. Again thanks for sharing.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 July 2018

A poignant write about life Sometimes in times of loneliness, hope springs. Wonderfully written with a meaningful message.10

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Terry Dawson 19 April 2018

Yes, we all crave the fellowship of human society. A universal need beautifully related, thank you Geetha

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