We never thought
It would happen so soon
That things would end
That things would be left unfinished
That so much would change
That everything would be scrambled
And hastily rearranged
I never had a chance
To really say goodbye
And now, bouquet in hand
I kneel by your graveside...
(12/06/08-In memory of William Hsu,1928-2008 ~Rest In Peace~)
Great I gave it a 10 Makes me feel sad though.
This is a strong write! !
oh, if only you said goodbye, things would be different.This is nicely penned, straight from your heart.Take care always and God bless Love, Meggie
Very sad... and I understand the feeling. Deeply emotional poem.
so touching....very wonderfully written from heart... with wonderful, touching message so sad...really sad not to be able to say goodbye..esp to a person who means so much.. and whom you cant see anymore... but everything is according to God's plan......
they never are no such thing is goodbye...Just sad byes so wonderfully writing... but at same time it makes me sad! 10+
Your poem shows the grief in you, . i feel sorry for you. Good poem
Obviously one feels grief after losing someone special........and only a true person can bring these feelings to words........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
You clearly showed the sadness of lossing one so close, and thoughts that followed. Well done. Also, I am sorry for your loss.