Goodbye Poem by Diana van den Berg

Wow! What a magnificent scene you have painted. I feel as if I am on the beach with you as I too can feel the icy water and hear the whistling wind. You have commenced the metamorphosis of your soul so creatively Diana. Absolutely excellent! Karin Anderson

I cite your last two lines: As I make my homeward way. The healing process has begun..........this is at least the start of healing. A very sad poem, tragic inside and amazingly the healing process has begun! NOW I read this lovely, but tragic poem.Past time is left behind. Very well captured, Diana.Goodbye to the past, the present time is starting........WOW! Most beautifully worded, though with a sad tinge. Thank you for sharing, dear Poetess..

Brilliantly done I love the images u created in this poem. Thanks for sharing.

I could find no poetry in your soul; I couldn’t teach your heart to sing; You wouldn’t let my spirit fly; And so I stand here on the moonlit beach With icy water at my feet And whistling wind around my ears. - - - - -Poetry and song are inseparable elements of a loving heart - - we can not find them in a loveless heart- -Better let go and move on - - - - - - - A poignant poem, thanks for sharing.

Could not stop reading this poem again and again.. it is so crystal like in lucidity, anguish, regret on separation, and yet no regret once having firmed up the mind to let go.

a poem of letting go and moving on to creations not yet begun? ............wonderfully written.