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Goodbye To Grief

Rating: 5.0
A girl in red dress laced with black,
Was sitting with her hands folded,
And eyelids exposed.
Her lips were the reason of rose's softness,
Her silence made its colour bold.
The wooden table was wet, the walls too.
The water was salty.
So many seeds were sown,
Each grew into a beautiful plant.
With the tear drops resting on her tresses,
Her foot rests on a rock,
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Wednesday, August 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak,life and death,love,parting,sorrow,sympathy,tears
Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2018
Hi Asavri, I read this poem with a heavy heart.... Her lips are the reason for the rose's softness Her silence made its color bold... Lovely expression of sorrow... Full score and onto MyPoemList
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Asavri Dhillon 02 June 2018
Thank you so much..
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Chinedu Dike 05 February 2018
A poignant piece of poetry elegantly brought forth in heightened rendition. Beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing Asavri and do remain enriched.
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Tom Billsborough 15 September 2016
To find an end to grief takes a lot of courage. Well expressed
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Asavri Dhillon 30 October 2016
Thank you sir..
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Amarjit Ghumman 03 August 2016
Good poem. Stay blessed dear Asavri
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Asavri Dhillon 24 September 2016
Thanks Ma'am.
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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 August 2016
An excellent and bold goodbye to grief. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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Asavri Dhillon 24 September 2016
Thank you so much sir!
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