'Oooooohhh, look at poor Harvey!
What a horrible thing!
He's lost both his eyes
and can't see a thing! '
I understand why Bri didn't consider this a poem. When it was first posted, I accidentally left out the second line. I immediately revised the poem, adding that line, but it took several days for the change to show up.
Cute little poem and hilarious picture! Thanks for sharing. Worth 5 stars.
Really, could this 'poem' be a 'poem' as 'free verse' or...? Nah! : )) Btw, Re: 'Kim Barney I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit', was it The Salt Lake Bank of Silliness? ? 4 stars ;)
It was actually the Richfield Commercial and Savings Bank. The building is still there, but it's not a bank anymore. Now you have forced me to write a new poem about it.
Kim, a poem this is not (I say) , BUT whoever made each bracelet sure knew how to tie a knot! ! ! I had to silently chuckle as I scanned to the bottom of the group photo. ;)) bri
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
OK, ...NOW I'll say it's a poem, but when I left the comment, the poem may have been missing a line which it now has. (cont.)