Googly Eye Bracelets 2 Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Googly Eye Bracelets 2

Rating: 5.0

'Oooooohhh, look at poor Harvey!
What a horrible thing!
He's lost both his eyes
and can't see a thing! '

Googly Eye Bracelets 2
Thursday, April 4, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 10 April 2024

OK, ...NOW I'll say it's a poem, but when I left the comment, the poem may have been missing a line which it now has. (cont.)

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Kim Barney 09 April 2024

I understand why Bri didn't consider this a poem. When it was first posted, I accidentally left out the second line. I immediately revised the poem, adding that line, but it took several days for the change to show up.

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Belle Wassermeister 07 April 2024

Cute little poem and hilarious picture! Thanks for sharing. Worth 5 stars.

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Bri Edwards 07 April 2024

Really, could this 'poem' be a 'poem' as 'free verse' or...? Nah! : )) Btw, Re: 'Kim Barney I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit', was it The Salt Lake Bank of Silliness? ? 4 stars ;)

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Kim Barney 09 April 2024

It was actually the Richfield Commercial and Savings Bank. The building is still there, but it's not a bank anymore. Now you have forced me to write a new poem about it.

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Bri Edwards 07 April 2024

Kim, a poem this is not (I say) , BUT whoever made each bracelet sure knew how to tie a knot! ! ! I had to silently chuckle as I scanned to the bottom of the group photo. ;)) bri

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Kim Barney 09 April 2024

Thank you, Bri. Those knots I did tie!

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Belle Wassermeister 07 April 2024

Bri, why do you say it's not a poem? Looks like a poem to me!

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