Return Poem by Saeed Jan

Death thought makes us pious. Lovely write.

very nice poem! abd beautifully penned by you! i really liked it very much! thanks for the share! :)

Someday we will return, one day we should go...back to Creators...and we may feel that whole heart is too small to receive His big love..live in content and nice, we sure about the time, but to live as we now we must never give up and do the best, try hard! ........Again One day, someday we will..and time bringing us to it_Soul

The nature of literary art- poetry is that the bard, if done expertly, leaves His work open to various interpretations... Different eyes.. Different vision Totally different but unique and perfectly viable&credited totally Personal understanding- critique.. Personally I didn't come away with the death imagery.. However taking fellow peers perspective of the bards work on board strengthens belief that every man(woman) Understanding is unique&true to themselves Your words are like a stick stirring embers in a stove.. Emotions than flames Inspirational

The fortunate moment is that of realization, or some revelation from the inside...Russell emphasizes upon the value of solitude that gives man a chance to stay face to face with his own self...

it is worth to realise that we should prepare to face that situation....Great!

Correction of my words on my comment..I should say back to Creator instead of creator...I Return to fix my comment LOL_Soul

A remarkable thoughtprovokin soulful poem! Gr8 job.