M. Asim Nehal

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Grapes Are Sour - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Those who complain every time that
life is not helping them all around
People are selfish, they are helpless
they are the best yet always feeling unrest.

They get bogged by other’s success
Unable to accept the facts and digest
for them writing poem is another test
Skills are limited yet mouth is farthest.

They claim to be courageous
but when comes the situation they disappear
they wait for the correct situation to reappear
they make valor claims as if they are daredevils.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Grapes Are Sour by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/27/2015 1:13:00 AM)


    Interesting poem, Man. liked it. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/4/2015 4:46:00 AM)


    Very true lines...They claim to be courageous
    but when comes the situation they disappear
    they wait for the correct situation to reappear
    they make valor claims as if they are daredevils.
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  • (10/27/2015 1:29:00 AM)


    most people I know!
    Thanks Asim-10
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  • Kelly Kurt (10/27/2015 1:27:00 AM)


    Many of us know such people. It is a shame but there are probably some underlying causes.
    Thanks, Mohammed
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  • Valsa George (10/27/2015 12:51:00 AM)


    Some are like that. When something is beyond reach, they dismiss it as sour grapes! Also grow jealous of others who have them! Interesting observation of human behaviour! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/26/2015 6:53:00 PM)


    Claiming to be very courageous is very interesting definitely. Skills are limited but life still shines with hope. Very amazing sharing definitely....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 26, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, October 26, 2015


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