Grazing Green Friendship Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Grazing Green Friendship

Rating: 5.0


Crane is cutie watching his grazing,
Old bullock is busy in grasping food,
Freshly grown green grass is tasty,
In this wild garden little flowers smile.

Gossiping little grazing little more,
Both friends are sharing feelings here,
Beauty of morning is adored by them,
Little plants in row are giving support.

Beauty of green friendship in tender light,
It is motivating both friends face to face,
Promise is given and taken for long walking,
Both are faithful to each other in deep love.

Watching this precious moment of friendship,
Little wild flowers have bloomed in joy,
In this canvas of green art gallery they shine,
Trees want to treasure friendship in daylight.

Crane offers prayer before God for goodness,
As in old as bullock breaks in pain and weeps,
Bullock offers prayer for crane to grow taller,
Crane promises not to leave bullock alone.

Little plants opening their wide leaves smile,
These are their hearts given in tenderness,
Festival of friendship carries green signal,
All are happy hearing story of their journey.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,16 October 2017. All rights reserved.

Grazing Green Friendship
Monday, October 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,friendship,lifestyle,nature,perception
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,15 October 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 16 October 2017

Crane offers prayer before God for goodness, As in old as bullock breaks in pain and weeps, Bullock offers prayer for crane to grow taller, Crane promises not to leave bullock alone. -An excellent poem...the brief relationship between the crane and bullock..the love, affection, tenderness and delicacies of their bonding in the green ambience has been meticulously articulated..Such a nice creation..! I loved and enjoyed the piece of work..Regards

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Rini Shibu 16 October 2017

We living creatures are inter dependent, need love, care and prayers from others.. Well depicted

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Tribhawan Kaul 16 October 2017

Lovely imagery created here. A perfect poetic nerrative.10

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Jeanette Telusma 17 October 2017

This is such a wonderful poem expressed here. The poem explores the companionship of two friends sharing space and time in peace and unity. Everything around them moves in unison to them and the atmosphere.10++++++

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Simone Inez Harriman 17 October 2017

A contented scene of friendship is described beautifully in your words inspired by your picture. Sometimes unlikely friendships can blossom from curiosity and trust alone. Others appear to have a bond not recognized or understood by the observer.10+

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Akhtar Jawad 16 October 2017

Little plants opening their wide leaves smile, These are their hearts given in tenderness, Festival of friendship carries green signal, All are happy hearing story of their journey. How close are the animals to the nature and how far away we have gone from it. A thought provoking poem.

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Hazel Durham 16 October 2017

All animals have soul and they care, as you have expressed beautifully in this delightful poem! Thank you for sharing!

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Rini Shibu 16 October 2017

We living creatures are inter dependent, need love, care and prayers from others.. Well depicted Rini

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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