Great Weather Today.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Great Weather Today....

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Great Weather Today….

is there nothing else to say
except about the weather?

Especially about the Dutch weather that changes every minute

yet there is
something ugly and horrible in it
also to trace beauty

beauty in ugliness

WOW! what a title
how is that
beauty in ugliness?

just think for a moment
just imagine
we are told different definitions

because there are thirty of us

indeed, thirty different visions of beauty

maybe the real beautiful woman
doesn't find much beauty in her mind

if you are very beautiful yourself

you have little choice about beauty

because then she sees herself all the time
as the benchmark

other subject please


© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Monday 21 September 2020

This is a translation of the poem Denderend Weer Vandaag.... by Sylvia Frances Chan
Monday, September 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 22 September 2020

the weather is supposed to be a safe conversational subject, unless a storm or terrible dangerous weather is coming brewing on distant horizons, hoping for course changes dissipating strength a better forecast, not an eye of storm double hit bullseye level disaster

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 September 2020

A beautifully penned piece. Truly insightful...5 stars++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2020

Dutch weather changes at each moment. But you have perceived each change and today's beautiful weather. The little choice about beauty is explored with minute observation. An amazing poem is well penned. Full 5 stars!

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Terry Craddock 24 September 2020

Weather Teacup Brews In Storm Clouds the weather is supposed to be a safe conversational subject unless a storm terrible dangerous weather threatens on horizon approaching storm black cloud dark menace is coming brewing on distant horizons hoping for course changes dissipating strength a better forecast not an eye of storm double hit bullseye level disaster flings about lives like falling leaves who will burn bonfire leaves restore order

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 September 2020

My response for the amazing poem by Terry Craddock: mesmerized about such friendly words and lovely gesture, makes me stunned, dunno what to say, but through my shyness I concentrate I dissipiate the fear and flaws from deep within me altogether summed up

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 September 2020

For Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir Thank you so much for your Full 5 stars! Thank you from my heart for your amazing compliments and words God's Blessings!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 September 2020

Thank yiou Rev. Berbard Sir for your 5 stars and the cute compliments on my poem. God's Blessings.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 September 2020

My response for Terry: Thank you so much for adding few more lines, makes my poem more complete. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the weather

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 September 2020

My response for Mahtab: Beauty in ugliness! Yes, it's ironically meant. thank you for your kind response.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 September 2020

My response for Deluke: Nothng to be sorry about, Deluke, the DUTCH weather IS like that. Too sad, BUT of course we have sparkling summers and loveliest springs, and autumn, is a season most favourite by poets here. Dutch Autumn is truly different than the theory about Autumn. OK Deluke, thank you for your response and thinking with me in my poem

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