Greed Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Greed

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Limited is the need,
Unlimited is the greed,
Engaged in misdeed,
I ignore your bleed.

Two pieces of cloth and a piece of bread,
Can keep me alive, I'll not be dead,
Shelter of a roof not touching the sky,
I can walk with feet don't need to fly.

But I want the greed,
How dire is the need,
Of a peace making deed,
See the painful bleed.

Peace of hearts and peace brains,
I should have it, no refrains,
Unlimited is this need,
And limited is my greed.

Tuesday, November 4, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: greed
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Basic physical needs are very few but the mental needs are unlimited.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 04 November 2014

Beautiful poem! Gandhiji once remarked.... 'This Earth has got everything to satisfy our need, but not enough to satisfy our greed'! If we embrace a simple living and is willing to share our excess wealth with the needy, there would have been no poverty on Earth! Great message for a world wallowing in luxury!

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 04 November 2014

Greed I ignore bleed, nice poem over topic given. Unlimited is the need and limited my greed. Beautiful presentation. Nice job done.

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Khalid Saifullah 17 February 2015

Thoughtful and impressive....................10

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Walterrean Salley 07 November 2014

Drawing a sharp distinction between need and greed - which many people sadly confuse. Well done.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Salini Nair 05 November 2014

Peace of hearts and peace brains, I should have it, no refrains, Unlimited is this need, And limited is my greed............................diplomatic is this need .....nice enjoyed

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Tadasha Tripathy 05 November 2014

Peace of hearts and peace brains, I should have it, no refrains, Unlimited is this need, And limited is my greed. I liked it very much.

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