The most unwanted feeling,
which shatters our entire life.
Heart is grumbling and bubbling,
with a shallow feeling of restless type.
Things could have been better,
if the mistake wouldn't have happened.
Relations could have been stronger,
if the right decision would have been taken.
I don't know up to what period,
this feeling will accompany me.
The situation is so weird,
slowly the poison is killing me.
May I repeat a cliche, ‘To err is human.' But we need to make amends and move on. Should not dwell on the past mistakes. Just move on. Nice poem.
Mistakes are very part of life.Mistakes also teach us good lesson.We can not go back in life and so there is no need to carry the guilt always. True feeling of heart is nicely expressed in this poem.Thanks for sharing.
The best thing that can happen to mistakes made in life is their realisation. The poem expresses these feelings beautifully and feelingly. I liked the poem, well-written.
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A well crafted perceptive write. Guilt is one of the most negative emotions and this write captured it excellently. Well conveyed.10
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Once you have a feeling guilt it is very difficult to feel peace. You have very beautifully penned the feeling. Thanks for sharing.
You are right Sir.. It is an undesirable feelings... Thanks for your appreciation
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Unwanted feelings and hate depress mind and a person feels that he is guilty. But always he should have positive perspectives in mind and through his positive attitudes his new relationships will be good. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned...10