Guilt Poem by abhipsa panda

Guilt

Rating: 5.0


The most unwanted feeling,
which shatters our entire life.
Heart is grumbling and bubbling,
with a shallow feeling of restless type.

Things could have been better,
if the mistake wouldn't have happened.
Relations could have been stronger,
if the right decision would have been taken.

I don't know up to what period,
this feeling will accompany me.
The situation is so weird,
slowly the poison is killing me.

Thursday, October 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: guilt
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 25 October 2018

Unwanted feelings and hate depress mind and a person feels that he is guilty. But always he should have positive perspectives in mind and through his positive attitudes his new relationships will be good. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned...10

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May I repeat a cliche, ‘To err is human.' But we need to make amends and move on. Should not dwell on the past mistakes. Just move on. Nice poem.

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Bharati Nayak 02 December 2018

Mistakes are very part of life.Mistakes also teach us good lesson.We can not go back in life and so there is no need to carry the guilt always. True feeling of heart is nicely expressed in this poem.Thanks for sharing.

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Abhipsa Panda 02 December 2018

Thank you so much mam for your kind words of appreciation

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 November 2018

The best thing that can happen to mistakes made in life is their realisation. The poem expresses these feelings beautifully and feelingly. I liked the poem, well-written.

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Abhipsa Panda 20 November 2018

Thank you so much sir for your inspiring words...I am grateful to you for visiting my page.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 November 2018

A well crafted perceptive write. Guilt is one of the most negative emotions and this write captured it excellently. Well conveyed.10

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Abhipsa Panda 03 November 2018

Thanks to you mam...you have given your valuable time to visit my page and liked it....I am grateful to you for that

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 October 2018

Once you have a feeling guilt it is very difficult to feel peace. You have very beautifully penned the feeling. Thanks for sharing.

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Abhipsa Panda 28 October 2018

You are right Sir.. It is an undesirable feelings... Thanks for your appreciation

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