Haiku 1 Poem by David Wood

Haiku 1

Rating: 4.8


It was the mighty
Oak that hid the birds from the
Hungry village cats.

Wednesday, June 12, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,cats
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Nature is all about kill or be killed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yasmin Khan 12 June 2013

Oak is a symbol of shelter. You've used it beautifully in the haiku.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 June 2013

Now you turn to Haiku's. nice observation from nature.

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Gajanan Mishra 12 June 2013

wonderful Haiku, and it is true and meaningful, good. Please read my new poems and comment.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 November 2021

A beautiful haiku dear poet. Liked it.........5 stars

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Ken E Hall 24 July 2013

Good poem to let cat owners know that they have an innate will to kill birds...regards

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Chandra Thiagarajan 15 June 2013

FROM SONNETS TO HAIKUS- -VERY GOOD!

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Wahab Abdul 13 June 2013

nice one with terrific image

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Farah Ilyas 12 June 2013

Thrilling like hide & seek game...good one

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