Rains can be risky
What with this pouring passion
Can turn one frisky!
10th May 2009
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Good one Subroto! Sensuality comes through with your Haiku! 10 Karin Anderson
Yes Subroto, from the comments it is evident, it has made people 'frisky' from here to Holland! -Raj Nandy
One may forget what he heard, But one will never forget how he made to feel. Such is the power of passion. It is frisk, brisk, if too much.. then it is risk... Enjoyed this read.
Rain and pouring passion............ i liked the expression Pouring passion. thank you dear Poet. tony
Said so well …I’ve this to say only … 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
we seem to have broken the vessel which holds this rain
rains have come cats and dogs with full energy now shall beat drum
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
yeh that passion can make one risky, frisky and pesky too wonderful creation, top marks-10 anjali