Haiku # 1 ‘kaiku Haiku’ Poem by Subroto Chatterjee

Haiku # 1 ‘kaiku Haiku’

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All haiku writers
Please take note and don’t do this:

10th May 2009
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Kesav Easwaran 10 May 2009

yes; that won't be haiku then...good kaiku, Subroto

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Shashendra Amalshan 11 May 2009

yeah vvery true indeed..goood versee....and advise for haiuku riters

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Anjali Sinha 11 May 2009

yeh taken note of thanks for the advice anjali

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Thanks the lesson... I had to look up your big word! Karin Anderson

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Vidi Writes 14 May 2009

Haiku should be crisp and clear Should spell the magic of words and logic, along with. The metrical phrase shouldnot pose like a - A roundabout figure of speech. Good Advice. Thank you.

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Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

........hmmm....? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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agree with mamta on this.....

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Nikunj Sharma 16 July 2009

arre haiku kaiku bombay mein rehne walon ko mere baap fursat kidhar hai

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Mamta Agarwal 31 May 2009

why only Haiku, all creative writers should avoid circumlocution, if they want to be understood. Haiku, because of its structure and norms, is a form which needs a lot of meditation before it flashes across your mind. then you say Eureka. we learn as we go good advise Subroto. you might enjoy my poem A pomegranate and a Haiku Mamta

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 May 2009

Wow Cheers 10

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