M. Asim Nehal

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Haiku - 22 Soul In Body - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

bunch of wild daisies
fluttering furiously
like soul in body.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, soul

Form: Haiku


Comments about Haiku - 22 Soul In Body by M. Asim Nehal

  • (10/23/2015 1:18:00 PM)


    Anything that is like 'soul in body' is not less than a living magic.
    Nice haiku
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  • (10/23/2015 4:18:00 AM)


    Oh what ecstasy! delicious write
    Thanks Asim
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/23/2015 1:44:00 AM)


    Soul in body performs drama. Very amazing sharing done really. Interesting sharing...10 (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/23/2015 1:32:00 AM)


    Amazing use of simile. Loved it.100 (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (10/23/2015 12:16:00 AM)


    I witness the same finesse here which is the hallmark of your Haiku poems. A philosophical thought embellished with words of great beauty, verve and meaning. Thanks indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Ari Alsio (10/22/2015 11:45:00 PM)


    beautifully written, well said, tightly wrapped, excellent haiku (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 22, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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