M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,172 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Haiku - 25 Winter Calls - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

i write with finger
to see the outside world
naked translucent.

Topic(s) of this poem: nature, winter

Form: Haiku

Poet's Notes about The Poem

How similar nature and life are,
both are naked and translucent
during the change over phase.

Comments about Haiku - 25 Winter Calls by M. Asim Nehal

  • (7/25/2016 2:55:00 PM)

    Createed a Nice imagery by this haiku (Report) Reply

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  • (12/22/2015 9:33:00 AM)

    Wow wow wow.....Awesome Man (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/26/2015 4:17:00 PM)

    Winter calls so amazingly in this context shared very nicely. Wise and wonderful haiku shared....10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (10/26/2015 1:27:00 PM)

    I often used the heat of my hand to write on iced over windows when I was young. The view through the melted scribbles was as you said. Thanks, Mohammed (Report) Reply

  • (10/26/2015 8:43:00 AM)

    hot air will also do
    great haiku-10
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 26, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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