Tell Me What Else Do I Need ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tell Me What Else Do I Need ~

Rating: 5.0


They say my heart is weakening
Yet my love is increasing, how come?
And they do not answer it.

They say my eyesight is fading
Yet my vision is perfect, I ask how come?
And they do not answer it.

They say my voice is not audible
Yet they clearly understand what I mean, How come?
Again they keep mum!

They say body cannot lift more than ten kilograms of weight
Yet I can move a mountain with my thoughts, How come?
And they show a blank face.

They say when I walk few miles, I am breathless
Yet my determination surpassed the bullet, How come?
And they look towards the sky.

They say my body action has limitations,
However, my wisdom is boundless, how come?
And they close their eyes.

I know my body is growing old and becoming weak,
Yet, my soul has full enthusiasm to drive me,
Tell me what else do I need.

Wednesday, May 19, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational,motivational,positiveness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 27 June 2021

CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, dear Mr.ASim Sir!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 June 2021

I know my body is growing old and becoming weak, Yet, my soul has full enthusiasm to drive me, Tell me what else do I need.WHAT more do you need? My heartiest Congratulations because you have won the hearts of the PH and Team and mine too of course! Truly most deserving poem!

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Deepak S S 20 May 2021

WOw They say my eyesight is fading Yet my vision is perfect.

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Varsha M 19 May 2021

Sir just close your eyes and know the bliss has visited you one more time reminding you you have to run another successful round. Hopeful poem. Good one sir.

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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this wonderful poem, dear Asim ji. Body may not be capable of many things but the soul is strong and determined to fly even to the heights of heaven.. Great. Top top stars

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S H 28 June 2021

Need to follow your heart and leave the rest to others to do. Great inspiring poem. Full Stars/.***

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So many valid questions....I like such poems. To my list. Congrats

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Varsha M 27 June 2021

Congratulations sirji for POD. Amidst all limitations and restrictions mind is always free as long as you don't bind in belief and other societal chains. Beautiful composition and positivity.

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Chinedu Dike 27 June 2021

A profound, philosophical rendition well conceived and nicely crafted with artistic brilliance. An insightful work of art...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 June 2021

If love is increasing more with greater beauty and hope, then love or heart is not weakening, rather love is getting more strength and full stars. An excellent poem is chosen as the modern poem of the day. Congratulations...; ; ;

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