M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,672 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Haiku - 34 Life In Open - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

from open window
i see a bare tree standing
beneath the blue sky

Topic(s) of this poem: life, philosophy

Form: Haiku


Comments about Haiku - 34 Life In Open by M. Asim Nehal

  • Kelly Kurt (1/15/2016 1:33:00 PM)


    A haiku in the truest sense of the form (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/15/2016 9:14:00 AM)


    With the rules of nature. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (1/15/2016 8:31:00 AM)


    Open your own eyes to see the outside. Deep meaning in few words. Very creative indeed. X (Report) Reply

  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/15/2016 8:26:00 AM)


    tree standing
    beneath the blue sky
    Staring in search of stars.......liked it as always....thanx for sharing :)
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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 15, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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